Is this a better statement of the facts?

This is not a forum for step by step legal help. Hire an attorney.

Is the following statement conclusory or a statement of fact?

Your statements are conclusory because they make assumptions based on underlying fact for which there is no evidence. The statement of facts is...

Can I withdraw a lawsuit and refile it if the Defendant was never served properly. ?

If the banks attorneys accepted service on behalf of the bank then you should immediately move for a default judgment assuming they did not answer...

I am not sure under what circumstances you would "shelling out a couple thousand dollars" other than having to pay a default judgment. You really...

How do I address a Motion Seeking Summary Judgment?

No attorney can provide the advice you seek without thoroughly reviewing all papers relevant to the motion. This is not something a litigant should...

You are free to ask ; they will most likely not tell you. The amount that matters is the original amount of the debt owed plus any legally...

How would I comply with this permanent injunction?

If I am correct, you have previously posted questions about this issue. It's time for you to retain an attorney.

How do the rules governing full faith and credit to all sister state judgments apply when 3 different states are involved?

Generally speaking, a valid judgment from a court of competent jurisdiction is valid in any state in which the judgment was domesticated pursuant...

What kind/type of attorney needed if someone owes money but won't return involving private investment / trading ?

There is little, if any, chance that you will recover your money. You should contact the Brooklyn District Attorney, The NY State Attorney...

Do I have a right, using OPRA, to see a police department's policies and procedures?

This a criminal law issue, not litigation. Reposted accordingly.